Feedback of peer review reflection

For this essay, I was paired up with Doyle and Grace. I was able to read their papers and add comments. I made comments on the information they needed to clarify and things they should add. When it comes to reviewing, I need some help. I do not always say things in a nice way.  I have a hard time finding the key concepts for my work so it is hard to help others for me. When I read my peers writing I look to see if they have the key vocabulary and have defined it, the most important concepts and what the article is about. When I can constructing my comments I read what the writer has around it to see if that sentence or statement fits will in the paper. I try to make suggestions on how they should fix it or what they should add. I believed that peer review is very important. When you are reading your own paper you know what you’re talking about but your peers may be confused. It is good to always have someone else’s opinion. I tried to add more but they were too big. Also, I do not understand why they are blurry.