Feedback #3

One lesson I could improve for paper 4 is integrating my own ideas with other Ideas. I need to follow up quotes with analysis, explanation and connections to essential questions. Another lesson I need to improve is working on my sentence level control. I must watch out for a lot of stigmatizing errors. To end racism society must do one thing and that is to not categorize people. Everywhere we go there is always some type of categorization to people. This categorization causes people to have race which leads to racisms eventually. This is the main reason why race is real because society can’t live without having an image, idea, and belief of what way certain people are.